All Comments on 'Mother's Secret'

let's have more parts please

Loved this story. More of the same please

This is a wonderful start to a story, but you have teased us in to wanting the story to keep going. You have a great gift and imagination, so please keep writing.

As an avid reader of your stories and a fan that every time i come to lit look for new stories and reread your older ones. This hits close to home. I do not know what it is about you but i relate so much to your stories. I have a

young black admin. asst. who on our 2nd. business trip together read my mind much like your heroine and turned me

into her personal Ashley. As a married white mother of 2 and with a very responsible position of authority, sometimes i still cannot believe it but cannot wait till our travels. GOD keep writing, and please tell us about Ashleys subsequent service. thanks so much dawn

Yet to read a story of yours I didn't like and didn't get me hard very quickly keep going!

This is a wonderful story,especially the slow way that the narrator's domination of Ashley is built up, but in my view it is let down by the way the narrator appears at the end to accept her mother's submission to Samantha. Surely there ought to be another chapter in which the narrator comes to dominte Samantha - this could be quite slow as the arrogant white woman comes to their house to dominate the mother and slowly falls under the young girl's spell.

Unlike some other folks, I really quite like the ending here. The idea of the main character finally understanding that her mother simply IS submissive, rather than just being a victim of previous circumstance, is actually rather hot to me. Nicely done! :)

I liked the story and wished it were me being humiliated and made to submit to orallly stimulating a dominant woman who controlled me completely. To be sat on by a woman who gets her pleasure humiliating and spanking me could not be bettered.

Women who read this seriously:

1. you aren't superior or inferior to each other.

2.you weren't born to be another person's pet or have another person as a pet.

3. if you think this is how it should really be then seriously leave this planet because it doesn't work like that, you can have a submissive personality but that doesn't mean you let people completely control your life.

I kind of liked this story. Yes, some black women are submissive. And some black women are dominant. It's all about personality, sexual preferences and personal kinks. I liked this. It was a fun read.

I love foot worship, sure hope in part 2 you make the submissives eat pussy and more

This was a good story and very stimulating however, there are many wholes and the story ended way to soon; The daughter could have dominated her mother along with Ashley. Also, one could surmise that Ashley's mother was the mother's dominate roommate whose boyfriend took the photo's. But this was never verified because the story ended abruptly..Needs more for a proper conclusion.

Hey bro your stories are great, I hope you come back one day.