All Comments on 'Mother's Secret Garden'

I'm giving this story 5 stars for being creative and original, although the scat stuff is a bit much.

Should have a scat warning at the beginning. Gross

However it was perfect for the characters and story line. Good writing.

Shigella, campylobacter, salmonella and E.coli are four bacteria commonly present in fecal matter. These bacteria, along with parasites like amebas and giardia, can cause severe diarrhea, abdominal pain and cramping, bloody stools, fever, nausea and vomiting. The viruses Hepatitis A and E may also be transmitted through contact with fecal matter.

LOVELY!

They didn't follow up on the whole "pot" thing. And I don't like it how they killed Jake and his mom off and ended the series. I would have loved for it to continue.

I felt that their death at the end added nothing to the story and was extremely lame and pointless

That was gross made me throw up some.

Hi, loved the whole thing. Quite an imagination. It is refreshing to read a story so filled with filth and wickedness. I did not mind the tasting and licking of poo, it made my stomach turn, but kept me tugging on my erection without missing a stroke. I wish I was there to add my semen to the secret garden. And, yes, the pot plants was not necessary. It was fun regardless!

This was funny as hell, I had tears coming out my eyes.

Urine does NOT come from the vagina - it comes from the urethra which is a part of the vulva. The vagina is a tube.

That was a... shit... story? Lol

Nice detail, pacing, and erotic punch. I'd love to read the story of the two in Purgatory.

Would love see new chapters with the addition of sisters, aunts shitting in garden

Kind of an odd story did not care about the eating shit part guess the ending told it all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Weirdo... Over six foot with size eleven feet? Lol are you describing shrek? Jeeez