All Comments on 'Mothers, Sex and Sons'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lupacupidum

Lupacupidum, no such word in Webster's dictionary.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Quotation marks are NOT optional

I was just looking at your windows curtains blowing, she said.

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-It was damp as fuck in there.

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-Yeah... it was.

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-Fuckin summer heat.

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NO!

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"I was just looking at your windows curtains blowing," she said.

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"It was damp as fuck in there."

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"Yeah, it was."

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"Fuckin' summer heat."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

More!

Hot start, well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I tried to read this, but

I couldn't figure out what was dialogue and what was narration and what was what. I did manage to scan for a definition of lupacup ... lupcupi ... that stuff and I found this:

As is common with mothers when observing their sons, a distinct chemical mixture operated within her, but in her case the chemical deficiencies and surpluses were the deviant to the common kind, unless what happened between these two is not in fact as uncommon as i have been led to believe. I have penned a temporary title to this procedure of chemicals and their emotional effect as Lupacupidum.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
So very erotic

How many mothers do the same? Mine did.

Spuds58Spuds58over 3 years ago

Stupid as fuck,! Please do not finish this story!

SteamerPoiny68SteamerPoiny682 months ago

A bit of a rambling, incorrect words in places & grammar.

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