All Comments on 'Mothership Wilderness Pt. 05'

Awesome series, both Mothership and palmer mansion.

Great concept for the this series but i wish the installments were longer. I've been waiting for a month and you only give 1 page? :(

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Ok, its good for what it is, but I think the formula is getting a bit tired. The more I read, the more Im hoping one of the other men figures it out (cue some sort of fight). You could inject some more excitement (and add more plot) to the story by doing this - maybe one of the men on board (John or Isaac, maybe both) figures it out and synthesises/injects themselves with the drug? Could open up quite a few avenues for exploration then (gay/group/flat out fight)...

I think you may need to expand on the origins of this drug at some point aswell...