All Comments on 'Mountain Magic'

Loved your story, tell us more about them.

I loved every word of this story. Thank toy for sharing your talent.

Loved this story, you are a wonderful writer. Hope to see more soon!

Hi People,

I like to think that Virginia has done the Best Job yet of putting in writing how some women feel about other women. It was beautifully put together. I don't like to think of myself as a Lesbian. I hope to have a family someday. But I also can't think of spending the rest of my Life w/o the Love of a Woman.

Love & Kisses,

Betty.Teaser at gmail dot com

has to be one of the most tender loving gay stories i have read in a very long time.

The way you treat the anticipation and build up to them making love is brilliantly written.

please write more soon.

Please don't make us wait another year before you give us another great and beautiful story.

The emotion of the characters was the core of the story and was portrayed beautifully. The Magic was not only in the Mountain, but in your writing.

This is an exquisite piece you really portrayed the acheing desire of it so well. hats off to you my friend.

One of the best love stories I have ever read. The characters were very loving and cute. Thanks for sharing this great story with us. And please continue your lovely work.

Thanks..

Your story is beautiful, thank you for sharing.

Both characters are smart, sexy......just beautiful.

I found your characters and the way they 'found' each other to me absolutely amazing. Please write more of the same

Great writing, just wonderful. Five pages wasn't enough. I'm raptured ;-)

with the romance tenderness and warmth as you have written here ,i wouldnt mind watching them with the wife (forget the sex parts)from an old 60 year old male

Superbly tender, romantic, erotic... just perfect. Keep writing.

They Would Make Movies like this

Now that would be Awesome

Sweet, loving, a real bond of affection pulling those two beautiful ladies together. Lit needs more writing this good.

From almost shooting her to becoming her girlfriend! Love it!!! ~ L

You write beautifully. Not too fast or too slow in story development.

Loved it!

A gorgeous sweet story with depth. Great characters, wonderful development. And, finally, the ending I was hoping for from page 3 on!

I, too, wish they could make erotic movies with great story-lines of romance that include real sex. I'm a guy, and I found the development of the characters and the hot sexual tension between these two to be very erotic. I don't like literotica entries that just jump right into the sex. Great writing!

Great story, great characters, envisioning even better sex. Funny how by reading a story a second time it seems that you read it differently and with less haste trying to get to the end to see if your envisioned end is what you hoped for. By reading it again it's not that you already know what the ending is, it's just that you (well me) enjoy it more. NOW FOR MOUNTAIN MAGIC REVISITED

I loved the slow build up, great job

You took your time building this and you have created a masterpiece of erotica

It was wonderful. Im so happy I looked around some stories and hit this. It deserves more views than this. Yeah, I agree with the comment 'not too fast, not too slow' though 5 pages seem too short for me. I wish you could have written more chapters that is if you're still up to it. *sigh

What a wonderful story! Beautiful, just beautiful.

what a wonderful story thanks for this.

Absolutely spectacular!!

I enjoyed this very much. It was a love story with an awesome climax. I wanted to be Jesse so much by the end it was that riveting.

..and I have to confess that it would have been good with or without the graphic sex scene. I liked it when they were teetering on the edge of getting together. You held them there for such an exquisitely long time. Loved the humour that came through the writing. Here we were in a wintry place but the writing exuded warmth. Just loved it.

I loved this...the slow, perfectly modulated smoulder leading to the blaze of passionate sex and the beginning of love and fulfilment...all narrated in beautiful writing!

Plus, I adore redheads!!!

This is the first of your stories that I have read. It will not be the last!

Very pleased to have come across this story. Jesse's explanation of why she loves women is particularly good.

Bad happenings need good ones to balance life, if so i just can imagine the wonderful future for cat and jess ...... Lovely idea and cute tale

"What I mean is, please don't think that just because I'm gay that means I'm going to make any moves on you or drool over your body or anything"

Jess has been doing this since she met her. Conniving Horn Carpet Muncher.