by MeredithEighty8
Enjoyed the story. I saw some holes and discontinuities in it but those were not really pertinent to the story. Good work.
Excellent read! As Elizabeth reveals her relationship and intimate sexual experiences, I became captured by her story. Joshua's backstory added so much. What can I say, except, I loved this story!
Even though this story is short(not that short) it gave a nice amount of details and was realistic Thank You for writing this kind of story
A few stories on Lit stand out as the best of the best. This one is excellent beyond imagination. There was nothing left out, no dragging, and no BS. Editing was excellent as there were no observable errors. A real professional always makes their work look easy.
This story is perfect. A good opening and a great ending. Thanks for taking the time to write and share.
Beautiful, perfect ending! Loved reading one of my fantasies come to life. 5 Stars!
It is -- a real love story. Josh rescued her and came to love her over time. I imagine the mountain man as a tender lover, with a big cock and hairy chest that are turn-ons for Liz. They grow together in their love and get their happiness after all!
Don't think she felt that way, especially when he slides that large, long and thick cock inside her. Remember he's 30 years her senior the only man she's ever been with, he's taught her and trained her to please him and be pleased by him. Rape? No way! more like him showing her the power of the cock.
As always, this author delivers a finely crafted sensual tale that is wholly believable. Highest marks.
Iceman,
Thank you for the lovely feedback.
I have a very special older man, and consider myself fortunate to have met such a wonderful man to guide and teach me. He was in part the motivation for my story and I have no doubt this scenario was probably replayed many times by many lovers (older man/younger woman) traveling west.
Thank You for this beautiful story; so human, so tender, so gently erotic.
Ab
For an older person who likes stories that could be real and true to life and ones that I could picture myself partaking in, this was a pleasure to read. You are now on my top writers list. Keep writing, whatever you write I will read. So I give you the max score that I can a solid 5+.