All Comments on 'Mountainside with Sister'

As you said it doesn't really matrer, but to set the record straight...

90+ percent of private jet types require two pilots.

Old airplanes often get new electronics, to increase safety and ease pilot workload.

That will save some eeight, but not enough for the pilot to notice on the controls.

Yes, old business jets are often scrapped, usually because they have older inefficient engines which use too much fuel or on really old jets, make too much noise.

A guy may fly several types of private jets, but in reality, a pilot has to attend a special 1 or 2 week school for each to receive a "type rating'. Most professional bizjet pilots might have 1-3 ratings but rarely more because of the expense involved.

Aside from that, well done.

Outstanding. It's a great story and well written.

I loved it, especially when she 'fessed up.

Nice. Aviation stuff was close enough that it didn't break the story - that wasn't the point of the in the first place - just the 'set up.' Good work. (Better than Hollywood gets it most of the time.)

Wonder if they joined the mile high club?

Love it

Excellent, especially the nice finish.

Excellent, loved it.

4 for me. The build up for emotions for their first time together was lacking, and there being absolutely zero result from her tricking him made it feel emotionless. Add on to that it not making any of it feel special and it just was lacking.

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A simple edit like

"So uh, I hear Connor was the one who actually took your cherry," I was torn about how I felt about everything now.

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She flushed, then looked cautiously in my eyes. "If I told you I was spiraling because I was never going to get to have sex with the man I loved would you have still done it?"

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I could feel the color drain from my face. "So, I was just a placeholder, then? I assume you'll be back with him after we're home."

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She looked shocked, then shocked me by kissing me hard. "It you, you big idiot. I've been in love with you forever. As soon as we're alone, I want to see how you feel in a bed"

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The rest could continue from there. Make it mean more than just a random hookup. Otherwise there's no point in making it incest category.

Well, being a pilot myself, it was better than usual. IT was interesting and a different approach than usual. I'd sign up for that flight. Good job!! Wishing you tailwinds (except when landing!!)

Pretty good. I like the premise and that they're still fucking. I didn't like the way she lied to her brother about being a virgin. Not cool. Thank you.

Good work, but I feel like you could re-visit this someday and expand it pretty easily if you wanted.

Agree with shadracht. It lacked the intimacy, which is a big part of this category.

Really appreciated the 'no anal' tag. Far too many of these either go straight to it, or end with a 'what about your ass next time' final paragraph or two... ruining them. From the usual British authors, of course, that can't really keep their true proclivities in check, even for a supposed bro/sis story. Good job, start to finish. as a pilot myself, I was pleased to not find a lot to nitpick, as so many stories (And even feature films) get most of that stuff entirely wrong.

I LIKED THIS ONE......CINCO ESTRELLAS!

fun pretty good

Outstanding.......CINCO ESTRELLAS!