All Comments on 'Mounting Tension'

by Riseandgrind

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
Very natural beginning

A intuitive sister will always know when a brother desires her. The smart ones seduce.

Very erotic story.

TheSeeker84TheSeeker84almost 4 years ago
Poorly written

Story is full of incomplete sentences, missing punctuation, incorrectly used words......get an editor.

utdomutdomalmost 4 years ago
Great First story!

Wonderful, short, sexy. I'm looking forward to more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
And not a Trojan in sight!!

Next part in 9 months time?

Moorbark3138Moorbark3138almost 4 years ago
What of Mom and Dad?

....... and suddenly mom and dad returned from their short trip and joined in?

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 4 years ago
MORE

The final sentence leaves it open for more story. Please write more!!

smltwnguysmltwnguyalmost 4 years ago
Not bad.

Pretty good, could have done without the DD boobs though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I agree, you need an editor..

..at least learn the proper verb tenses of the word 'lay.'

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Scorching

That was almost perfect, I wanted it to be much longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
part 2

i want more about these two. you got a great start keep it going!!!

tobytimtobytimalmost 4 years ago
Finish it

Far from finished well finish it and don't leave us in limbo hate authors like you prick

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting story

Many siblings have been thrown together in quarantine. Situations develop with them getting closer and often helping each other satisfy needs. A lot can be done without going all the way.

RobNallyRobNallyalmost 4 years ago
Wow

If only I could turn back time and have a quarantine situation with my own sister.

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