All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 05 Ch. 04'

I love the direction your story is taking! I can't wait for the posting of the next book. I would like if you take into consideration doing a side story on "melanie and doug". Keep up the great work!

Michael and Mouse deserve a happy ending! Lower score for Melanie's sexcapades. But, everything well written as always.

That's all I can say to this, as I'll stop reading the series with this installment.

It may be that I read up to here, solely to see Micheal and Melanie come together. To me, Micheal and Melanie were the greater draw. Though, I'm also amazed with how the author was able to breathe such life into Mouse.

I'm certain I'm in the extreme minority, though I don't mind. This series was perfect for me up to this point, and I'm going to take my leave here. Absolutely, a fantastic series.

This is in my opinion the best book in the series. The nuances, and just the writing over all makes perfect use of the English language to relay such a depth of emotion to the reader. I'm glad you took such a large chunk out and devoted it to show who Mel really is, and how she struggles through her mid life crisis. Next to that, there were some pretty funny moments that flowed perfectly with the very real feeling of what Mel went through that I got from reading this book. Very well done. Little side note, after Mel and Michael were finished, the little intermission that wrapped it up was totally read in Morgan Freeman's voice in my head, like he was observing them in the wild while hosting a documentary. Anyway. Please keep writing. You have quickly become my favorite author on this site. 10/5

Alcohol affects everyone differently. In Melanie's case, it lowers her inhibitions so much that after raping Michael ahe is now thinking of having sex with Doug, her own son.

I liked how Melanie was having a conflict between her good side and her evil or wild side. It allowed the reader to learn more about her when she was younger.