All Comments on 'Moving Day'

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Mumbo700Mumbo700over 5 years ago
Promising and enjoyable

I liked the relationship between Cassie and Eliot. The threesome set up was, of course, a turn on and you’ve got great imagination. There could have been more description. Some of the moves had me confused, like was Cassie tethered to a crock pot throughout and Ayala seemed to get half naked almost the instant she entered the room. Hope this helps you write more because you should carry on. (And if there is s crockpot going free ....?)

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