All Comments on 'Moving Day With Mom'

mom joins, preganacy please continue

Well written, descriptions were good, thoughts were well defined, even fears. Creative and a nice read.

What a wonderful story! You hit a homerun!

I love Randi's posting more than almost anyone I could name. CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Great story, very comfortable with the easy love they shared.

Bravo!

Excellent, the kind of story that I love. Always the happy ending. But, there could be more as long as it does not get weird and heavy.

Part 2 Please

Its fascinating as a fantasy. Reality and incest beyond normal social mores are disturbing. But fiction is imagination beyond humdrum boring. You do have ideas and the skills to express them.

Usually these stories are so much stroke and not enough soul. I really enjoyed this, thank you.

What a wonderful story. Thanks for writing it!

Not so sure about this. A beautiful mother and a loving sister. Mother going her own way and living in a separate apartment. Yet they love each other, mother and son, brother and sister. Something is not right?

I read a similar story, where in the end they all 3 lived together. Still a good story...

I enjoyed the story wish that you could continue the story 5stars gpa

well done..well written,,,love the way it slowly builds to its obvious conclusion,,,,very romantic yet erotic and so taboo!! no one needs to marry. they all related and have the same last name,,how convenient! lolol.

LOVE IT!!!!! Would LOVE to see the story continue!!!!

Great story. Well written. What a lucky man.

Nice

Great Story! It begs for a part 2.

Lovingly intimate and seriously hot!

A great fantasy.

Please continue.

Five stars!

Loved this story I hope there will be a part 2

Please revisit this story and give us a follow up… How do things go between the three of them.? Will there be daughters that love their dad like their mom and gran? Will there be sister-daughters? Pray, do tell!

Great romantic! Go on with a follow up!

Very beautiful story. Hope for a part 2

Great story. Please continue. Would love to read more on how things develop. Waiting for part two. Thank you.

Fun story! Thanks.

Every time I read this, this line/but bugs me:

"... [Brad had an invitation to a party at a mansion] You know I've always wanted to go."

I went over to the hall table and opened the drawer. When I came back, I handed her the envelope. She opened it and gasped.

"You had an invitation? Why didn't you tell me?"

"I didn't want to go," I told her. ..."

Okay. She fucked up epically. No question. It was a despicable thing to do. But...if he really knew she "always wanted to go" to one of those parties...why the hell didn't he indulge her, even once? He didn't know she was the kind of person who would lie and scheme the way she did here. He just "knew" she was his girlfriend, and apparently always wanted to attend one of those parties. And he just said "ummm...nope! Fuck her, I don't wanna, so we're not gonna!" seriously. If my boyfriend got tickets to the Moscow ballet performing nutcracker, and didn't tell me because he didn't want to go? I'd be heartbroken. And that would be if he just didn't think of it, because he didn't like ballet etc, even though I adore ballet, and The Nutcracker is the first ballet I ever saw, and why I fell in love with the art, and he knows that. But if I asked him why he didn't tell me about the tickets, and instead of saying "oh, God, I didn't even think of it, babe, I'm so sorry..." or something like that, but instead simply said "I didn't want to go. I thought this other concert [or whatever] was much cooler!"

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I'd realize that he was a selfish asshole. Like seriously narcissistic douchebag territory.

Obviously a society party isn't the same thing, but seriously how hard would it have been to tell her "hey babe, I have an invite to this party, but this band is going to be in town, and I'd really rather go there with you..."? And she asks if he'll be able to get another invite sometime, or if he'd be willing to go there first if possible, or whatever. Anything would be better than just "oh she's really interested in this thing I don't like so I just won't mention it to her"

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And the character clearly isn't that kind of douchebag, so every time I read this story (which I otherwise absolutely adore) it feels so incongruous.

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Personally I'm pretty sure the character as depicted here *would* have mentioned the invitation, they would have discussed it, and she (Gwen) would have agreed to go to the concert instead, perhaps somewhat begrudgingly. Then she might've stupidly decided she couldn't handle waiting for another possible invite to appear... And thus she would tell him she was sick, and find this Brad dude. And then get discovered and *scene*.

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But I still love this story. Hell I reread it at least once a year! It's just, every time, this scene makes me twitch.

Oh man, you should write more about them. There pooled income and ties enable them to get a larger house with there own pool and workout equipment. They can all three live together and love one another. Maybe they could hire the old girlfriend as a live in maod and tease her, not giving her anything. Many things could be written on them. I just do not like to see other men becoming involved and screwing thing up. Good job keep writing, please.

But I thought it would be more logical for them to buy a house and live together. Still, it was a good five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ story.

Definitely need another chapter. Like when mom moves to Memphis. What happens next..Mom and daughter get together? Old girlfriend comes back, and excepts the "family" arrangement and becomes number 3? Please write some more

Wow she waited for him all those years.yup she is the one I hope they stay together because I seeany men are always around her. I hope she stays faithful

more of these characters please.

Third or fourth time I've read this. I still love it. Thank you

Need another chapter

Beautiful story , now I'm jealous .

Is this a real experience or just a made up story ?

Absolutely beautiful. As a plot lead-in I especially liked the 'Gwen' back story. The prose had a cleaver, lite and breezy writing style. Sex not withstanding, a very pleasant and delightful read. I did, however, feel that the driving 'tit' and BJ scene seemed a tad accelerated. Kudos to your muse so please continue with this wonderful story. I wait with baited breath . . . .

Wow, almost a perfect story. 5/5! Thanks so much for this! Hope there is more!

This needs a follow-up 5/5

IKR Payne's has the best most melt in your mouth sliced pork shoulder sandwich and the building is odd but it's a old service station gutted and turned into a restaurant. The brickwork covers where the service doors were. BTW I'm from Memphis.

Comprehension. If these are common desires, then it makes sense how isolated tribes, communities have common DNA, despite arbitrary social taboos and mores. ( Jerry Lee Lewis marrying his 16 year old cousin, or jokes about hill folk having inbred features.)

Time for a follow up!!

This story still has very interesting paths to explore.

Hoping you write round 2.

Great story. Easy read. Well written. How about a sequel?

Second reading. Loved the way this story started out with all concerned being simply a very normal and loving family. No drama - However, once he was in the truck with his mother the plot line became way too accelerated. Not a smooth segue at all - But still, all in all, a really great read . . . . 5/5

amazing as always and overly exciting, it could have started with kit and mom from home during son's absence but that's just the perv in me......keep it up 5/5