All Comments on 'Moving In with Mom Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Stop acting like you’re eventually going to publish an actual story. Either go somewhere with this, or stop. Four installments of basically nothing so far. Over it. And out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Anticipation climbs, again.

At least the petting has grown, but not yet matured.

A couple of spelling slips, but the heightened sensations of the writer might be to blame.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 years ago
Mom is coconspiratore.

Sleep/drunkenness are means of lessening guilt for taboo mothers.

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