by yellowjacket66
I imagine this is the pipe dream of a lot of men, reuniting with one's long lost, first true love. Nicely done. 5*~~JB
A nice soft story, not a BTB or anything like it, more a love story, I expect that lots of comments will say how she should have done this or he should have done that, but nicely done.
Ok story but lacked in a lot of ways. Needed more character development and plot was predictable. This felt like something a teenager might write.
I’m a sucker for a nice “lost love found” kind of story. Could it have been longer? Sure. You can write another or someone else could write it. But that does not take anything away from what you have written and shared. I for one am grateful. Thank you.