All Comments on 'Moving On Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Plot mistake?

At the end where she gives him the phone, how is he meant to use it?

She hadn't undone his handcuffs at this point.

So just something you missed, or im missing thats allowing him to take the photo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very sensual sex act dear!

Hello from Greece! Very sensual sex act dear!

…we must love each other…

…in the same earth we all live…

… a great part of love is forgiveness…

sincerely,

Elias

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