All Comments on 'Mr. Anderson'

A little better proof reading would have removed some of the distracting errors. All in all, a good read.

Well it seems spell check was used but someone with a grasp of the English language should have proof read this story. Author to be encouraged by the story but needs an editor.

That was terrible. The grammatical errors. The lack of sophistication in Cherry despite her so-called 'intelligence'. To me it seemed as though you broke out the Smirnoff and wrote this in ten minutes, using only your feet to type. Very disappointing.

What did you mean by I apologies. Ruined the feels and reading

So many spelling mistakes it really broke up the flow of reading.