by MyEroticBunny
Twentyseven, it's a cuckold story. That's how cuckold stories go. If you don't like cuckold stories, then don't read them. I thought it was well written.
I'm no literary genius or arbiter of good taste but I know what I like and that's a good sex scene. The beginning was clunky and disjointed but I haven't read the first one. However once Bunny got down to business I think you did a good job. 4*
This story is even hotter than the first one you wrote on here, if that is even possible. Can't wait to read more of them. Hopefully, there will be a followup to this one where they encounter Mr. B's boss again in another situation: at the office, or at a party, or maybe she just invites him over.
Bunny is a memorable character.
The story had potential but something was missing.
4 stars.
Just wish I could punch you in the throat for writing this cuck garbage..... Sissy boy wimp, karma will fuck you up no doubt...
I hope hubby Mr B enjoyed sharing wife with all those men cuz she vwill never be the same. I can't see much of a future for them now that Eric has stretched that pussy out. 5 stars
Great story however since all your stories is about Bunny & Mr. B you should connect them. In this story it sounds as if this is the first time she has been shared and Mr. B doesn’t like it, however in the previous story he was proud to share her