by betweenthesheets
wasn't a choke up or a tear down with this story. Thanks again BTS. But i'm betting on more
The Eagle has spoken
TWO TALONS UP " "
would like to know wut happens between them if she goes to duke or wut and how she do in the state championship
Please write more, I feel a connection with these characters.
Excellent job
This is a while after you wrote this but will you be writing more? Curious because this and your other stories are quite good. Naturally I came here for the porn but found myself skipping it for the story... 😰
There are a lot of different styles of writing on LE. I prefer your style of a story with sex rather than sex with a story. This chapter had me crying, not just tearing up, but crying like a baby during the dream sequence. Thank you for this. Do you have plans to finish the story anytime soon? Either way thank you for this!
I don't really read this kind of series , but damn you had me looking back at some tough times i had back in past. It goes without saying i didn't wanted to relive that time but man, you helped me to cope some in a weird way. thank you sincerely for that. i hope to stumble upon your next chapter when you do. And plz do continue "It's the way you loook at me" series.
This was a good story and became more than just the sum of a few sex scenes. You should add to it and finish it.
Thank you.
I wasn't expecting this series to hit me so hard it really made me think about some things in my past and it kinda helped me cope with some things in my past. This a really great series and I hope to see it continued and again I really have enjoyed the series so far and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in their future
All I can say is wow...
I have been reading stories here for years
But I have never ever felt so evolved with a story line.
Please please continue this series
I find myself wanting to know what happens to everyone,
Did the girls go all the way to state and win??
Did Duke come through with the verbal offer??
Did Jake go to Duke as well??
So many questions
I consider myself a hard nut to crack but the tears were flowing. Bravo
Your stories are excellent. This one is no exception, but please give us more. And, thank you for your hard work.
Is this the end of the series? It feels like this chapter isn't even complete. Does it really end with him "letting them clean up"? That's a very odd ending in my opinion.
You have done a great job developing the characters and story line in this story.
You can't leave us hanging. You have to finish the story. What about the State Championship? What about Duke? What about You? See I'm talking to you like you and Taylor are real. Great job. Now finish the job.
Needs another chapter as we need to know how college went.
This is one of the better stories here and it really needs to be wrapped up. Is he going to be offered a position at Duke to follow taylor there with a purpose? Please don't leave us hanging.
I've read all your stories and they all end very well, this one threw me as it doesn't close out as well as the others. Please give us a better closer than they went to get cleaned up. On that note I think your stories are some of the best on this site.
It currently feels like it ended mid flow. Do they win state? Do they go to Duke? How does his parents react to him dating Taylor? I feel like the headmaster and his son will try and get revenge, hat happens there? Missy gonna be good when someone else lands her guy again? Jeremy surely won't stop now?
I really enjoyed the story, was very annoyed when Teagan died but happy with everything you after it.
To quote Inigo Montoya "“You Keep Using That Word, I Do Not Think It Means What You Think It Means”
Author has a real knack for sports themed stories. This one on basketball, he has another on football and yet another on golf. Keep up the good work.