All Comments on 'Mr. Braun'

An excellent story. I liked the way you stuck to the younger voice in the diary and didn't let her drift into being a woman with more experience of the world.

Fantastic hot story. Loved it. Keep writing more!

She got him where she wanted and used her sexy wiles to get him into bed. Dressing like a slut in front of him, gave the mental picture of sexual needs that were out there to be taken. She didn't spot him, just enjoyed herself.

I loved the story. Very hot. Keep it up.

I want Herr Braun to growl nasty German things in my ear! Very hot story! I think this might just be one I'll have to read again sometime...

Dirty talking is a major turn off.