All Comments on 'Mr. Nice Guy vs. High School Ch. 01'

Please do not make us wait months for part 2

I was gonna give it a quick scan read now and cum back later to finish it. DUH, I couldn't stop reading till I finished it all and want more!!! Nice tale.

Just another NiceGuy

You introduce us to a shy, insecure, nerd, and then let him try to become more socially adept by rekindling a long time childhood friendship. But you can't be content with letting the kids learn about being being high school teenagers, you have to insert a controlling Dom into the mix.

It it is now just another overreaching and confused story that tries to do too much. Woulda Coulda Shoulda all over again.

Oh Well

Okay story but way too many typos and misspell words. It is very distracting to try and get the “hole” meaning. ;

Got half way through a good story and then turned to garbage:(.