All Comments on 'Mr. Peter Chapman Pt. 01'

WOW, this is a great story. Love it. Cannot wait to read chapter 2. AAAAAA++++++

YES..... This is a very very good one 5 Stars.

Thank you so very much.

Brilliant writing and I love the change of pace with this story. He is to good to be true but not overly so, he isn't a Navy SEAL/ ninja😆😆😆

Breath takingly awesome. Please post part two very soon.

I really enjoy this story and look forward to more parts.

Glad to see a new series from you!

I love the way you 'paint a picture', You are a gifted writer and are one of the best at setting a stage for the erotic drama that you want to tell. I can't wait for the next part. I am looking forward to this tale. Thanks for Sharing!

His behavior is totally unrealistic for somebody who has suffered a loss like that. He’s be a basket case.

Awesome start. Looking forward to seeing more. Thank you.

Nice start. Good character development and you did a nice job making the readers feel compassion for the main character. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Excellent, and something different. Glad you are writing this as a Romance. Thanks for this story. 5/5.

Wow. Can't wait to see where this goes. Love how you write, and how you've developed this one. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent story so far. Love how its going so far. 5 BIG FAT FLAMING RED STARS!

WOW great story

Fantastic story. Loved it. You had me crying. Your second installment is out and going to start it now. 5stars

An odd story, those girls are crazy about some young fella? But I enjoyed it and looking forward to the next two parts.

really fun, with a bit of suspension of disbelief. I found myself smiling.

I absolutely love your stuff! I'm sorry I can only give you five stars.

Unreal

What an unbelievably incredible story. No sex. Just real characters. I almost felt tears of my own as i read Peter's trauma of losing his son and then, unknowingly unable to save his wife right in front of him.

Part 2, here i come.

Well done!!!

Beautiful! 5*

Very moving and in some ways, so madcap. Fancy being so good and handsome AND surrounded by all these women.

Great story so far.

first story i've read of yours...got me totally hooked...

while not my chosen field had a lot of exposure to MD's and worked in a busy hospital for a year after HS before starting college-this is first class....

Damn fine story