by JimBob44
Fantastic! I wish you would start writing again. I’ve read all your stories a couple of times already and really miss your writing.
I'd call it a sweet love story, but its really several sweet love stories all rolled into one good read. I liked Natalie and Oscar's story: it's sweet, dirty and a bit bent, yeah? Love that there's a nice kink in there, and a bit different, too. I liked Natalie and Brianna's story, too: it's a bit sweet, romantic and cute ...but kinky.
I think what I like best (and I know I'm repeating this from previous comments) is that you've built a world in 4 or 5 towns where all these people live, where we've got to know the streets, the businesses, the local cops. It's like watching the episodes of a familiar series, but better.
Thank you for writing real (-ish) people in real places.
Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
I thought this was a very good story, I really liked the way you used the cucumbers, hope there is another part coming soon
Ah yes, some comments on the stories are due, because they are really good stories. Not always what I want to read, but I do because they are full of offbeat, interesting characters wandering about amongst the normal people in some hard to find part of Louisiana. You do favor stories about lesbians, older men with very young women and best of all people who forsake a life of crime or sloth to become productive citizens. So, I commented on the story, but I did enjoy reading the disclaimer also.