by geronimo_appleby
Super build of anticipation. More chapters would be great, please.
I think it was perfect to end it as you did. We all know the details of the deed, it's the scene that makes the story interesting.
Thanks
I have laughed really hard quite a few times while reading this. I hope you win the contest.
You were right to end it the way you did. Perfect in fact; left so much room for (1) a future installment or two, (2) the reader's imagination to fill in the blanks. Thank you for putting together such a great "first time" story for all of us to enjoy.
Well, after that introductory weekend, Mrs. Beattie helps Robert find a full-time, regular job and helps him further develop his bedroom skills. That was romantic & a fine story.
What a great story..The ending allow each reader to personalize it.
Thanks!