All Comments on 'Mrs. Bonnie Ch. 01'

we had to close our orgies down due to lack of inches

Wish it had been me so many years ago.

Brilliant story. I think most men have a woman they knew from childhood, that they'd love to screw. Few get the chance though. Keep on writing, I'll keep on reading!

Fantastic story.

Combined so many elements without overdoing it.

Good length too, the 2 encounters was just right, not trying to tack another group scene or anal section onto the end when all the passion is gone from the writing.

Older women stories are the best, especially when they avoid incest but keep the action hot.

Can't wait for your next work. This one eclipses those other 2.

One gripe tho, he shouldnt need the biggest dick shes ever had to be a stud. Maybe he couldve gone down on someone too? Though I guess its a 1st time, and you gotta save some material for later.

5 Stars,

- Tocador

..the story was just the rigt length as was the man, lol. I often get told my stories aren't long enough but I think it is important to leave the reader imagining. If they have no imagination, God help them in the bedroom department! Thanks for a fun story with just the right level of detail.

This was great. When will we see CH. 2?

wow keep going pleaseeeee

Part 2! part 2! part2!

Sounds as if the swingers group has a new member and it is a "big deal" in the old term usage. Too much too fast but interesting story line.

An unlikely fantasy.