by tarkatony
nice but--while delightful in and of itself--not really adequate when compared the ballet of love making in this story. My attention and enthusiasm for this author is predicated upon his apparent/obvious love of people and ability to incarnate them as real versus actors in a masturbatory frenzy.
jjws%)
Story has merit and most of all, realism from start to finish. Somehow it must be followed up with the delightful woman of the young boys dream having true orgasms from love making in the way of intercourse. Finish the story and make it happen in the same vain as this reading.
This story had a great flow of words and the concept was much to real to not have been an actual affair for the writer, nor many 'J-O' sessions. Would like more of the story and his not getting off so suddenly. Anyway, I found it a five star story.