All Comments on 'Mrs. Church Pt. 01'

That was fabulous!!! Would love to hear more. The humiliation of the cuck daddy was the icing on the cake. More please, more!!

I loved the story. Now for her younger sister or maybe her best friend to come by for a visit

only thing I would add is a more detailed description of her tits especially her bra size

marty

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Right up my street more more more maybe her older sister / friend joins the fun 👍

A good read...I enjoyed it a great deal! Keep it going, I look forward to more!

I enjoyed the story - turned me on! However, I do have a bit of constructive criticism to offer: please make sure to proofread the story before submitting it. Spelling and grammatical errors can throw off the flow of the story whilst reading (I mean this in the nicest way). Also, please could you make the next part longer (as it was such a good read! :-P Loved the dirty talk too, by the way!) and if possible how about some illustrations to go along with the story? It would be nice to have some sexy visuals to see whilst reading! xx

What a superb story, every young man's dream. An ideal age difference, I would prefer a slower more detailed seduction but we all have our preferences. I would like to read more detail about er mature body. A full description of her hanging tits and nipples, her mature soft round belly, her thick thighs and of course her arse and hips as she was on her knees. We cant have everything but we can dream.

Thank you for your positive comments and constructive criticism, which I’ve taken on board. I don’t usually take much notice of anonymous, but have listened to some this time.

Pt. 02 has been submitted and I’ve proof read it this time. Please note that I’m Australian and use Australianisms like arse, instead of ass.

***Entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

Loved the story with Mrs Church, more please.

Fuck her for me !

Loved this story, brought back memories , for when I had lodgings as a 19 year old student and my land lady was 40 ish , she was very attractive and her husband was also working away.. One day I was home alone in my room.and feeling horny and I had found a pair of her knickers laying around, very smooth and silky, naughty me picked them up and went and lay on my bed , stroking my cock with them, then panick my land lady walked into my room as i was about to cun, OMG what now I though, a silent pause and she said let me help you. she started to stroke my cock, and she said you like my knickers to play with. I managed to say YES she soon had ne cumming then she put my cock in her mouth and licked me clean

From there on we had sex , sometimes a little kinky, I stayed there for six months, we had a wonderful time she taught me many things she also let me play with her knickers when ever I needed . Life was great

This is SENSATIONAL and I was living every moment of your story

Plssssssssss keep writing