All Comments on 'Mrs. Claus Cums Once a Year Ch. 01'

the same way again! How dare you tarnish her "pure as the driven snow image!" Great sex writing as always, and good luck in the contest.

I had to wait another year to get my train set when I was a kid . . Damn horny elves. A good one Boxlicker. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Jesus, Box, that was hot as hell! My panties are soaked and it's all your fault (not a complaint)! Very hot, wet and horny piece. Good luck!

I mean, he has to be jolly from something, doesn't he? What better way than to join his wife and the elves the next morning.

hey u fucking ass this piece of writinf is a piece of shit y dont u go and let santa clause go fuck u and suckur little dick that cant even satisfy a baby ,people might even think ur a woman with a tight pussy .fucking no god slut face cock sucking ass like u .

This was one wild ride! The CPS comment cracked me up. Great job, good luck! :)

Everyone always talks about Santa but never do you hear about Mrs. Claus. This is a great read about Santa's once a year business trip. And while the cat is gone ...... Lets just say, the mice really live it up and down and up and down ....

An irreverant shot through a portal of playfully cuckolding the Man who commands great respect from most even into maturity. But not all it seems. Obviously there was no one else to rite under? Puzzling eh??? Contest?

The best part was AIDS and STD's are unknown to elves.;)

One massive orgy of elvish proportions Box.

be an elf...Great work Box. Good luck in the contest.

I just wish I was an elf :) Very well-written and enjoyable.

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Happy Holidays :)

Ali

Box, I think my Xmas Xcess story is still a contender, but you may have just staked a strong claim for most mindless sex in one contest entry. :)

A hot, fun read. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

May your stroke crown never tarnish ; )

Best of luck in the contest!

Box, your story rocks. LOL

I would love to be an elf too.

Can I, can I, can I, please?

In addition you have gathered some terribly funny comments.

U r gr8t at riting hot storis. LOL

Good luck.

Black Tulip

As I read your story, I couldn't help but picture the scene in my mind and that made it even more enjoyable. Well done!

Apart from the fact that I hated the idea of Mrs. Claus doing the dirty on poor ole Santa, the story was a positive cornocupia of sexual athleticism and feats of lasciviousness that couldn't help but thrill the reader.

Top marks!

I love the premise of this! Nicely done!