All Comments on 'Mrs. Derby Pt. 01'

This is intriguing, you have me hooked. Looking forward to more.

Thank you for your comment, I have submitted part two for approval. I hope to hear your feedback on the next installment. Fsow x

A little too short, perhaps. I think you could have given more time to building up a background story and given us a bit more on the two women (unless you have all that planned for a future part). Still, this part was quite well written and I hope for something interesting in future parts.

Part one was brief intentionally ... the background is as you said explained and built up in future instalments. Hopefully part two will be approved and uploaded today which gives a little more explanation. I do appreciate feedback though so Thankyou for taking the time to give me some x