by Moondrift
Very nice,belivable,and a enjoyable read. Hope you write more soon.
From start to finish it was great. Fantastic beginning to a wonderful ending. Please keep writing excellent stories such as this.
This was one of the best Romance stories I have read! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
One of the best I've seen in a long time. Excellent story with wonderful characters. Asha is the woman we all hope to meet, with that kind of dedication to her vows. A great read. i thank You for this one.
Brought a couple of tears to my eyes. I really appreciate the respect afforded David. Well done.
I loved the story. I get so tired of stories where women are depicted as if they were living the male fantasy of being available and instantly ready. This story is far more believable. Ultimately, it's all about relationships, with sex being only one aspect. You've illustrated that important life lesson well. I have to confess that I haven't read your other stories but I'm going to remedy that error. Thanks for writing. Phil
Your voice is refined, yet approachable which is a hard balance to strike. The love in the story is evident and it is a logical and sure love that is not found here on literotica or in society much anymore which makes it so much the more precious. Thank you for sharing this with us and I will be reading the rest of your works as well.
Your description of genitals etc.What has happened to the author who wrote such graphic erotic sex scenes,especially incest ones ,for instance "After The Ball".Not reformed have you
I agree with a number of your readers, that this was a beautifully written story about a truly loving couple where sex was only one aspect of their romance. I,too, will have to read some more of your stories. Thanks for writing.
60 year old George
Not be voting for this shit if you knew that he is also DARKSIDEOFTHEMOON.And not only that a Ginger Beer.
It was a wonderful story about 2 people who really loved and were really committed. I don't care if Jeffrey Dahmer wrote it -- a good tale is a good tale.
<p>Having read "Mrs. Grace & I" by Starlight almost 8 years ago I entered this story with some apprehension. Certainly, what is the probability of 2 stories on the same site with almost identical titles, story lines and styles by 2 separate authors?</p>
<p>The probability is zero. You are most definitely the author who penned the other story too. However, that matters little since both stories are <b>ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL</b>. By shear coincidence I was reading "A Christmas Play" by Starlight for perhaps the 10th time last night. It is my favorite story on this site. Your gentle romantic style is clearly seen in all of them. Thank you for sharing them with us.</p>
<p>Salamis</p>
I don't use the word 'outstanding' very often, but this story truly merits it. An outstanding, beautiful tale. Thank you. Michael.
Ps: Isn't it interesting how the negative comentators usually do so under the name 'Anonymous'!
Beautiful story, characterisation top notch. The sex description was perfect it fitted into the story & was gentle, not contrived.
What is with the nasty "anonymous" character assassinations? Is it a tactic whereby other authors tear down a submission in order to rise above the work to win a prize? Nasty & juvenile. A "Christmas Play" is one of the top 3 submissions on the site. Bravo author!
Dan.
I took my time reading this story. I guess it might be like enjoying a drink of vintage wine, I wanted to savor every bit of it. I always enjoy your stories, wherever I may find them. I truly appreciate all that you have done for us.
that is one of thee most wonderful stories i have read on this site please continue to write
Told by the Master, Moondrift. Thank you for writing this for us.
that was so touching and so beautiful - out of tragedy comes love - a lovely, lovely story.....one of your very best.......
I will add that I believe that a marriage with the woman older than the man has a better chance of lasting that the other way. As a man gets older he tends to become less potent and the younger female gets unfulfilled, this puts a great strain on the marriage. With the older woman she can be happy with her younger husband in a sexual way in addition to their other love. I went to put this in favorites and it was already in there. Thank you, author, for writing this sweet and romantic story. (Old perverts like me often have a romantic side, especially in our old age, HAH!)
I bailed before I finished the first page. It may be a really good story but all that
“proper” English just ruined it for me. I mean, my God, who actually uses the word
“thither” anymore?
A wonderfully beautiful love story — Thank you for sharing. I just found your writings this afternoon and I look forward to reading more of them!