All Comments on 'Mrs. Hanson Ch. 02'

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kiwiwolfkiwiwolfabout 19 years ago
Damned nice story

Hot as hell and buddy I can't wait for the next chapter.

GirlWatchinGirlWatchinabout 19 years ago
To Easy

Hot sex, but getting there was way to easy. Getting to the point of them having sex was so easy, it was almost anti-climactic. And, as hot as that might be, it can also be a let down for your readers. You might consider meking the story more interesting by adding in some surprises... like maybe Susie comes in and or nearly catches them! Then what are they going to do? Or comes home and finds a line of cum im Mom's hair. Something. Don't make it too easy for them, and your story will become more interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Liked it

I thought it was a great story...

another please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
hot again

Another hot Mrs. Hanson story. I hope Susie cums home wearing her hot cheerleader outfit and mom puts on her heels, hose, and French maids outfit. Then he can cum all over the face and clothes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hot as hell

superb

jdbjdjdbjdabout 10 years ago
It Was the Glaze That Did It

Love Johnny's sense of humor! After the "glazed" comeback it was definitely 5 stars.

chytownchytownover 7 years ago
Good Read****

Thanks for sharing.

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