by velvet hammer
Hot sex, but getting there was way to easy. Getting to the point of them having sex was so easy, it was almost anti-climactic. And, as hot as that might be, it can also be a let down for your readers. You might consider meking the story more interesting by adding in some surprises... like maybe Susie comes in and or nearly catches them! Then what are they going to do? Or comes home and finds a line of cum im Mom's hair. Something. Don't make it too easy for them, and your story will become more interesting.
Another hot Mrs. Hanson story. I hope Susie cums home wearing her hot cheerleader outfit and mom puts on her heels, hose, and French maids outfit. Then he can cum all over the face and clothes.
Love Johnny's sense of humor! After the "glazed" comeback it was definitely 5 stars.