by byronbert
I really enjoyed your witty and stimulating use of vocabulary. "Berthed in her snug little harbor"; "crashed the custard truck"; "my pork sword was mincemeat"--eh, not mixed metaphors, please. But alliteration and so much more than simply sex prose. Very few grammatical or spelling errors, which were obviously simply typos and not due to ignorance. This is the first of your stories I have read. It certainly won't be the last.
Nice pace, quick read. It needs a bit of polishing to remove extra words, wrong usage of a word and typo's. All in all you get ***** from me, which is a rarity.
Now there's a great performer from the past and a truly hot milf....good story too!