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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Quite naughty.

Lovely sex scene with Mrs Marlow being fingered in front of her husband Derek.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dangerous fun

Wow, imagine doing all that in a restaurant. Such a delicious feeling of exposure. What if Derek had been seen in his wife's panties.

Can't wait for Ch 3.

49greg49gregover 10 years ago
Hits the spot

A really fun erotic story. They are soooo very desperate for the Lords and obviously are willing to do just about anything. I love the dangerous scene in the restaurant as they are both expertly manipulated, So erotic. Mmmmmm.

AnnatartywifeAnnatartywifeover 10 years ago
Thanks Mary x

Yes I agree. Great description in the cafe scene..wow so naughty and decadent!

Loving it x Great, great, great x

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Another cracker.

Well done Mary, another belting story from your pen, well keyboard I suppose.

shoeslayershoeslayerover 10 years ago
A jolly good show !

I have so much enjoyed reading

Mary R's stories. !! I just don't

know which story I love the best.

Mary, you have the greatest imagination

with a wonderfull erotic flair.

2 thumbs up from the guy riding a Harley

Sportster over in St. Pete FL.

Keep it up Mary, I know I will.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Series

Love all your stories. Mrs Marlow is a fantastic character, please give us a long running series of adventures from her and Derek.

josephstevensjosephstevensover 10 years ago
Fun, as usual...

A typical fun erotic story...high fantasy in middle-england. I would have used 'slimy' instead of 'sticky'....but lovely! Thank you...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great stories

Loving the Mrs Marlow tales, more please!!

phobosukphobosukover 10 years ago
Well done!

Another excellent story. The tension is well maintained. Makes me feel quite squishy.

RayCathodeRayCathodeover 10 years ago
Great, Mary!

Sexy and erotic - another naughty outing with short skirts and nice fairy cakes.

Love your mind, Mary.

iceblue34iceblue34over 10 years ago
Doodle and diddle

It’s always a pleasure entering Mary’s unique and special world. Warm and teasing, sexy and naughty, fun and always arousing.

JonnyfliesJonnyfliesover 10 years ago
Always a pleasure

Well done Mary. The interaction between the older friends and the younger couple really works well. I look forward to the next installment. You could feel the level of excitement building all through, leading towards their next meeting. Super storytelling.

JRobJRobover 10 years ago
Outstanding effort

You have outdid yourself Mary. Exquisite story and a wonderful read. Mummy and Daddy and all of us readers are proud.

Paxo1944Paxo1944over 10 years ago
Awsome Story

Loved the build up and the rising sexual tension, certainly had me rising. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Deliciously outrageous

and outrageously delicious with the phrase "toyed with my hairs" - and in a respectable public place too! Your best so far. D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
very needful

The older couple has made the younger couple so needful ...they will do anything to be with them and the elderly man has such a big dick its excites them all...a great story please write more.....

jrbradford64jrbradford64over 10 years ago
Well Done!!!

I just read both Chapters and can't wait for the next installment. The way you're building the story has me painting to See what the Lord's do with the Marlow's.

MythsMythsalmost 10 years ago
Brilliant!!

Mary, you have a knack of drawing out every delicious moment and keeping your readers hanging on to every word. Brilliantly written. Well done.

RegretsRegretsabout 7 years ago
Wonderful consistency

It's always a joy to visit these stories by MaryR

Botsup11Botsup11over 3 years ago

great story i see you have not lost your touch

nicolawilliams1942nicolawilliams1942over 3 years ago
pleasure mature pleasure

slowly but coming on

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