by L.A. Wicker
Great story.Great pacing.Romantic.With fully fleshed out charactors.You are a very skilled writer.Hope to see more and I will be forwarding your story to friends who I know will like it.You would have made a great writer for the TABOO film series.
that was fuckin awesome. my nuts are still boiling after reading that. i liked how she tookcontrol and booted out beavis and butt head. any chance you'll do a follow up?
busted my balls time after time reading this story. The build up was great and the sex well im jealous of him
great stuff
Loved it! Your story was excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed every word. Keep up the good work!
the wife and I loved reading this together, Must have given her some sort of fantasy in mind she felt so wet herself.
Nice story, Keep up the good work
Just outstanding! Great story, hot sex, just enough romance. Keep up the good work!
A full 1000 out of a possible 100. Please, please continue on this with possibilities of the baby being born and then you begin working on siblings. As our society frowns on this kind of relationships, just remember that God made us "good" and that included the ability of a man and woman past the ages of puberty to mate and breed, regardless of either's ages or social status.
This story was excellent, can't wait for a sequel! (Can't wait for an 'Aunt Raven' sequel either! lol)
Good stuff, but if I might make a comment, To me it felt like the ending was rushed in place.
Thanks Just the same still loved it :)
you need to learn when to use words that end in ING and when to use words that end in ED. and use actual exclamation points.
As a Tybee Island native, I'm curious what town outside of Savannah they're supposed to be from?
what a great story glad they ended up happy and pregnant keep writing loved all your stories
Read this awhile ago, thought it was good then, it still is. 5*