All Comments on 'Mrs. Wentworth is a Nurse'

Would be good to hear a follow up when he is taken back to the doctor.

So good to see Mrs. Wentworth again, please continue :)

Cheers and all the best

Phil

I am glad that you are keeping this story going.

For the read.

It would be nice to see an anal thermometer used by the doctor on him 😁

well done a lovely erotic story, lovely pace and perfect finish

I am happy to see her back, I have always enjoyed their relationship

Fantastic series....please add more chapters. I could this all day long. Ty

PS: maybe they come out in love and talk about getting married. Then his mom shows up and tell her to get lost cause he knows she abandant him for her self pleasure. Doris and him discuss that topic.

Thank you for continuing the story about Mrs W. and her adventures with her boy toy. Thumps up!

But i've some questions, maybe answering in a new part?

What about the docs full examination?

What about Janine? Is she coming back, maybe some work for her to do and after that getting a reward? ;-)

What about his mother?

Well, I have read all your Mrs. W episodes now and I have some suggestions for you:

1. You must proofread your work if you want to improve your storytelling. Start today proofreading everything you write, be it a story, a check, or the salutation on a greeting card. When the reader has to stop and mentally find and correct your mistakes, the flow of your story is interrupted and the spell you have worked hard to weave is broken.

2. Look-up the term “gerund,” and learn how to use one correctly.

3. Learn the proper use of the hyphen. The phrase, “jet-propelled plane” needs hyphenation since the “jet” describes “propelled” and not “plane.”

Hope this helps.

I have doubts that this is coming back, but if it does, one idea for a chapter is that they go to a gala or something

I think you need to keep this going. You have a lot of ways this can go, don't finish this story yet.

Just found the Mrs Wentworth series and read them straight through. I hope that you write many more chapters. I do feel that if you write more he should stop calling her Mrs Wentworth unless they're playing and she calls him her little Stevie. And Stephen could start becoming just a bit more assertive.

This series can go on for about 15-20 more chapters. There’s so many things you can go back to and build upon. It’s a good story and nice change of pace. Don’t overthink it, come back!