All Comments on 'Mrs. Williams Ch. 01'

Absolutely great. Very realistic and flat out exciting

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One of the worst. Obviously written by a 14yo male. Terrible spelling, terrible grammar, terrible dialogue, (REALLY terrible dialogue)... The only good thing was that it ended!

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But you desperately need an editor sweetie! The spelling and grammar errors are distracting.

Ia m so wet and hot right now... Damn I wish i could have been there. I love being told what to do and having to ask and beg. I love older ladies as well as younger ones....

I am going to have to finger myself for an hour.........

Lisa

I thought I was reading a story version of Simon Says!

Stick to comics!

I have a neighbor girl, who is 23 next door, and I am just waiting to get into her pants. I have been teasing her and letting her see me and my personal parts and she never disappoints me in not looking. This story has gotten me so wet, I think I may call her first thing in the morning.....

I thought it was good...It got me wet.

Some people nitpick everything.

Exquisite -

A beautiful story of an older lady conquering a maiden.

Lovely story-line. Appropriate level of detail of the sexy part of the seduction.

Ranji

Loved the story can't wait to read what happens next in chapter 2