by saraslutty1
This Gal knows how to turn a man on! Great story! I loved it! The vivid descriptions really got my motor running!
Keep up the great work!
It's about time someone stepped up and breathed some life into a story. Believable enough, and very sexy.
that was a wonderful story and it was a fantastic topic. I loved it but it was a bit choppy with names but please write more. You're AWESOME!!!
Your story and your plot idea, were execptional. Please don't stop writing.
i do like this story read it a few times, but you really should re write it and make sure what character is what, the boys change around a few times btu still hot.