All Comments on 'Mrs. Young Ch. 01'

The best friend's mom who is still in late 30's is a cliche and that's how this story started. Then the author took the trouble to heighten the tension with the blanket search. The the tension was resolved fairly early in the story with the clandestine tryst ( nicely described btw ) . The aftermath is where the story is departing from cliche-ville.

Things are up in the air. Regrets and confusion abound. The dialogue is intelligent and realistic. Anything could happen. I'll be impatient to find out how things shake out, thanks the author's skill. Full Marks !

I'm not sure this even belongs here! It's certainly the top tier of literotica offerings.

This is outstanding writing, nice pacing, and above all believable! Punch up the characterization a bit and I'd be giving it "wish I could give it 6!" rating but for now you'll have to settle for 5.

Your writing skills are to be commended, especially if your submissions are ALL on Lite.

This story has legs, and I'm hoping the confusion they are both feeling ...will soon be straightened out. Pun intended.

Since the boys are such good friends...be sure to include the son...fair is fair n'est ce pas?

Thanks Don

While I agree with the positive comments, sadly this is another writer who uses "laying" for "lying" - as in "I was laying there", "lay" for "lie" and "laid" for "lay". The correct useage is really quite simply and is taught in primary school.

I was taught that hens lay and humans lie.

nice can not wait for more, i can relate some what to this situation

but my son's friend was the one that did the hitting on me

Some very real emotions and circumstances. Many women like to tease son's friends. Most don't take the next step but would if situation is right. Stay realistic and keep writing.

Very nice, storyline brings back memories. Look forward to your next submissions.

I like the confusion the characters are showing. It shows that they both want each other even more and Mrs. Young isn't giving into those feelings. I hope she does!

I hope he can convince Jenny that she should go all of the way with him, and let him satisfy her sexual needs.

Hope to see more soon, and thanks for the read.

Is they're not paced like all the others ones here -- even the good ones -- that are pretty much structured like having sex itself. You take your time, you leave the reader wondering where it will go, and you integrate the very sexy scenes into the story, which proceeds even beyond the literal and literary climaxes. Absolutely cannot wait to see where this goes.

Really? Sorry, that was as far as I could go.

(FYI, it's "midriff")

Oh what a young man has to dream of, plenty of lads will know about a friends mum being a dream in the night, well thought out and more that a quick read, looking for Chapter 2

That's how i felt the first time with my son's friend

despite a few silly glitches. Thank you.

On to chapter 2, thanks

confusion, temptation, hopefulness, and anticipation abound. (as the Dude would say).

Hoping to see how this works out, for all parties.

btw: why is the - anal - tag listed for this story? or are you as confused as the rest of us?

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Mom better get off that pussy in the next chapter. Besides you never evaluated the blow job. Ogk so the kid loved it, you should tell us how much he loved it.

hmm him refering to him self as a man is redicules hes 19 ffs and stil cant stay home alone? litle momma's boy not that there is something wrong with that. there is just a big diffrence between a litle momma's boy and a man.

You can't be serious author....that's the best you could come up with...Matt is 19 years old and his parents won't let him stay in the house by himself lol. Does his mommy hold his peepee when he goes to the bathroom too! C'mon and put a little thought into the story before you write something so stupid!

Looking forward to next Chapters. Thanks for sharing.

Older woman, younger man is one of my favorite situations. I love the fact that her calling him a boy upsets him so much. Great emotional setup of the characters too.

Also, my favorite part about discovering a new series, is that I can see there are several more chapters published so I know the sex continues... (I've only read Ch1 as of writing this comment)

Older woman, younger man is one of my favorite settings. I love how her calling him 'boy' aggravates him so much. I hope the teasing / dominate role continues in the coming chapters. Great read!

*5*... Incredible..!!

Not a pleasant start is she?!

Mom's a cheat and Matthew is being a dick because his dick is doing his thinking for him.

Move along, nothing to see here.

Can think of so many of my friend's mums growing up that I'd have liked this to happen with!

A good beginning. I gave it five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I liked it UNTIL he started his whiny blackmail scheme and said SLUT......

I HATE it when a respected and desired woman becomes a "SLUT". She's still a beautiful and desired woman....treat her as such. Don't be an asshole.

Very sweet beginning. His youth came out at the end though. I think he was trying to get her to react to keep their relationship going, but that's not the way.