All Comments on 'Ms. Laura Ch. 07'

I absolutely love this series!

But boy do you need a proof reader. The last 4 paragraphs broke the flow and were quite incomprehensible. There were also little typos and grammar mistakes throughout the whole thing but the last 4 paragraphs had some damn serious issues.

I confess that I'd have preferred that the young man wasn't so chaste up until this big visit with Ms Laura. As much as it's nice to see things through the eyes of someone experiencing something for he first time, I found it difficult to believe he's this side of Amish. I'm still in.