All Comments on 'Ms. Piper's Computer Issue'

Interesting premise.

A bit rushed. Lacks interplay. Could have used SOME reaction/s from her while he was pleasuring her under her desk, for example.

Could have used SOME involvement with those beautiful breasts.

Could have used SOME extended teasing of his cock with her feet. With his reaction/s to it.

Four stars.

Not rated, needs to be completed and resubmitted

Very rewarding story, well described, nice pace, and promising ending.

Uh, where's the end? Did you upload the wrong file?

I didn't finish Page 1 because it defies believability.

Sorry i submitted the wrong file, i resubmitted earlier today. Microsoft auto save automatically stopped updating the file on my hard drive as i wrote and edited and only updated the copy in the one drive i guess.

For whichever version I read, I thought it was fun! A classic entry into the sexy office/boss genre. Very hot.

Loved the fantasy of office work sex with a superior woman boss

Would love another section for 4th bullet of the outline document to completion

Thank you

WOW. Terrific story and an exciting read. Hilarious. Great plot & characters. Thanks for the story.

Amazing first effort. Well written with good pace.

Amazing story! I look forward to reading more from you

Fantastic story. I so wish you would write some more chapters. Well done. This is my first review after years of reading.