All Comments on 'Ms. Rhonda's Finishing School Ch. 01'

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Abby_HartAbby_Hartover 5 years ago
Wonderful

Please allow me to be the first to say how wonderful it is to see another series from you Holly. I can't wait to see where these fantastic words take us.

Caiomhe4454Caiomhe4454over 5 years ago
Love it

Hi Holly I can see the beginning of another great series here

You are a really talented author and this type of story grabs the attention of your reader makes them feel that are there viewing the story. You go into real detail about the characters and surroundings that it makes it easy to visulise what your writing

Keep up the good work

Hugs and kisses

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very happy

So glad to see a new series. This one seems to be just as exciting. So wish I could live in Hollyworld.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Thank You Holly

I count myself as a very grateful reader . I thoroughly enjoyed the initial chapter .

This tale could be a 1000 page novel . Amazing how Rhonda is both teacher and learner in this experience . I appreciate this view into a part of life I know very little about . Nice to see that dominant does not necessarily require a cruel and unkind approach . The subsequent chapters will be terrific no doubt .

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
please more

oh wow what start to a amazing story. the way you write is so heart felt to me, you evoked such wide range of feelings . i'd love to know a store like new beginings here in oz . thanks xoxo

Dawn191270Dawn191270over 5 years ago
Well Done Holly

Hi Holly its so refreshing to see a story like this . I am the same in my approach to a sub . I would never mark or hurt a sissy or Sub beyond what they could take . Looking forward to the rest of this series Thank you Holly .. Thank You ..

melinda4cdmelinda4cdover 5 years ago
sweet

A very nice beginning to what promises to be a lovely story. Understanding and acceptance accomplishes so much more than fear and intimidation. I read the first 4 chapters of Role Player, and now have to go back and finish that story. I love stories in which strong women lead their men to understand that submissiveness and sexual service to all is a worthy goal.

Hugs,

Melinda

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Terrific!

A perfect beginning to a new series. Thanks Holly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
very nice

Such subtle writing by an author who seems very well "served" in the subject matter, I look forward to much more of the same exquisite detail, thank you

wake5911wake5911over 5 years ago
Great start

I am now very intrigued as to where this will lead....keep up the good work

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