by hollygurl29
Holly you have captured both Missy and Abby's characters so perfectly, I absolutely love it and can't wait to see what they get up too next.
Abby
I have never really thought about pet play but reading it through the relationship with Abby and Missy has got me curious
It's no a thing I would have ever though about exploring but you have in a way sold the idea to me to give it a go
Really loving the connection of Abby and Missy I can't wait to see what you have in store for them in the future
Hugs and kisses
Xx Caiomhe xX
I have been enjoying The “Becoming Abby” stories as well so it was really great to read this installment. My kudos again for your story writing skills Holly!
A wonderful story line, I hope you have many more chapters for our delight. I only wish I could be as good as your Rhonda.
The plot becomes better and better .. Thank you Holly as I said love the heart and the joy . Its not all sex and lust .. well just sometimes ;-)
Holly. Never has a story out here brought tears to my eyes like this one. When Rhonda and Patricia sat on the bed in Ch. 2 I lost it. I could feel the love. You have painted a beautiful picture through your words. I am truly in awe of your gift as a wordsmith.
Love and peace.
BTW. Of all the characters would love more of Randolph's story. He's the person I would love to be in this story.
Your style, knowledge and compassion appears throughout your paragraphs. While pet play is something I have never considered previously, I feel a small level of understanding through your words. Your treatment of a submissive's heart is quite beautiful and reflects an understanding within your own. Most enjoyable and very much appreciated.