All Comments on 'Ms. Stuart'

I do not know the amount of people actually on Lit, but my uneducated guess is that less than 10% are content providers. Kudos to you for taking the time to write and then the courage to submit your story. Guess what? You are a published writer! Congratulations!

This is a site created to promote hack writers, remember that. Almost every writer here, and every piece submitted is in need of an editor. That is not always possible, but do not let that discourage you if you don’t have one. If you feel within you that you have a story that you want to tell to the world, then keep writing and keep telling them.

Short sweet and to the point. Thank you.

i hope theres more chapters to this

I liked it but have a couple of (hopefully) constructive comments. You set up a fairly detailed backstory which was good but I think you could have built an attraction between them or from her to him versus just going from no romantic/sexual interest on either side to her suddenly kissing him out of the blue and having sex with him. And being more wordy/descriptive with the sex scenes also would have helped. For me those two things would have made this story a 5-star instead of a 4-star. Still, for a first story it was good.

A few definite issues, but better than the vast majority I've read on this site.

you have a bad habit of putting paragraph breaks where they don't belong, as wall as breaking standalone sentences in half with periods, creating fragments. A decent editor would raise your scores significantly.

A professor that keeps condoms in her desk drawer? You might be fucking a skank. No wonder she's divorced.

Wow she is fast

4★s but hopefully there is some more chapters sooner or later

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