All Comments on 'Mud and Magic Ch. 15'

very interesting, can't wait to read more thank you

That's a nice place to leave it for now. You are foreshadowing one hell of an epic showdown before this thing over for good though. Can't wait to see what you have planned. Don't you dare George RR Martin us.

Just opened this chapter: Wanted to express thanks for getting your writing back on track. This is an ingenious story.

It was a long time in coming but that does increase the satisfaction of closure. now I need to go back and re read it all in one sitting

An enjoyable story, thank you. I look forward to other stories form you and a continuation of this one.

I loved your story. You should think of setting up a Patr30n.

@RedHector: I do have a Patreon. Link is in my author profile. Or at least it should be there. If not, check out

https://www.patreon.com/Blind_Justice

Wonderful story, well written and captivating. I just recently found your stories and the world you have created has definitely captured my imagination. Thanks for a wonderful escape from the real world.

Leaving a comment is not asking for my generousity as I am glad to have the opportunity to thank you for your story. I especially like the invitation as I worry to appear spamming (:

Your writing feels unique in how you blend sex and adventure. Also compliments to the editor, lovely when writing errors do not distract.

Simply brilliant. I’ve given up a few weeks of my reading time on this most excellent adventure; nothing compared to the tremendous effort dreaming up then writing down this epic. I simply can’t wait for the next installment (I don’t even have the comfort of Stranger things to distract me, season 5 will be at least a year!).

Anyhow, brilliantly written, gripping, spun like a silk worm’s web, and pretty sick to be honest - imagination is a strange beast. Thanks so much for sharing!

Excellent story, look forward to more! Definitely checking out your other works!

THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!! THE WORLD BUILDING, THE IMAGINATION, THE SEX SCENES, THE FORE-SHADOWING, EVERY THING WAS SPLENDIDLY DONE, UNARGUABLY ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER WRITTEN ON THIS PLATFORM, STUFF LIKE THIS!!! IS WHY I COME COME HERE, STUFF LIKE THIS!!!!! WELLDONE

Thanks for posting this wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. The one niggling thing that disappointed/baffled me is that Rhys was given the hammer with a disjunction stone in it, and when it would finally become useful (to smack Celeste right at the end), Rhys and companions teleported out instead. It seems there was no valid reason for him not to be able to use it, and it wasn't mentioned at all in his thinking processes at that point in the story.

I truly enjoyed this story. Very well written. One of the best written stories on here. Can’t wait for the next arc in this story.