All Comments on 'Multiple Units #107'

Fantastic as always!! Can’t wait for your next submission. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.

Nice story. I enjoyed the way that the plot built. I initially thought Barbara was going to get a job in a strip club given that they needed money, she couldn't find a full time job and the stripper on tv mentioned how much money was to be made dancing. I liked at the end how the author showed where all the characters and locations came from in his previous stories. The one thing that would have made it better for me is if Barbara had bigger tits. What can I say? I love big titties!! Lastly, I'm not sure if I'd call 5" "massive" or a "monster". According to Google, the average erect penis measures 5.1". Just saying.

But why she ain’t got job at strip club, huh? Normal job is like boring and shit, yeah.

Will we learn anything about the fire and who why and other things.

Happy to read the new story but now I am stuck waiting for the next one.

Another great read from one of my favorite authors on this site. You always manage to squeeze a lot of character development into a relatively short story. Also, I always appreciate it when you add the "previously seen in" section at the end of your stories. Thanks for sharing.

first you had too much info on the apartment more like you were the manger trying to rent one..... then i have never heard of an 18yr old telling anyone to stop teasing him. the first time she showed her tits he would have been all over them when she was bent over at the fridge she was regretting teasing him? and that was after she sucked his cock and cum>>>.. many other things were wrong with this story......sorry but try again

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What's up with the over use of 'Huh?'

Might as well name the kid Huh. I couldn't get past the first page, and I like me a good incest story. Every second word out of the kid's mouth was Huh. It was irritating.

That was a enjoyable read. Thank you for your story's..5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Loved it.

I really wanted to like this but the Grammer was so bad.Obviously english is not your main tongue.Sentance structure was horrible.Kid had the IQ of a head of lettuce.