by CommonSenseMedia
Not as long or erotic as other stories, but still really fun reads. Hope you keep the storyline up.
Not sure whether having Nate inter-dimensioning is a good idea. Maybe over-complicating things. Nevertheless one of the most interesting concepts I've come across here and I would like to read more.
By the way, opaque means can't be seen through. If you can see underwear beneath, then it's transparent or translucent.
LOVE THIS CONCEPT. Please keep up the chapters on this. Fun and erotic, you really got something here I think.
Please continue. This is a very interesting concept and well written. Looking for more!
This is one of the best Sci-Fi stories I've ever experienced. That includes movie & TV. I love the multiverse aspect. Please continue this story. We need more.