All Comments on 'Multiversal Maddie Ch. 02'

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youjizz123youjizz123almost 4 years ago
Fun Stories

Not as long or erotic as other stories, but still really fun reads. Hope you keep the storyline up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Not sure whether having Nate inter-dimensioning is a good idea. Maybe over-complicating things. Nevertheless one of the most interesting concepts I've come across here and I would like to read more.

By the way, opaque means can't be seen through. If you can see underwear beneath, then it's transparent or translucent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Will the story continue?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Rick and Morty meets Penthouse Forum

LOVE THIS CONCEPT. Please keep up the chapters on this. Fun and erotic, you really got something here I think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Don't stop! Very interesting concept and well written.

Please continue. This is a very interesting concept and well written. Looking for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great concept! please continue this series...Im invested now haha

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is one of the best Sci-Fi stories I've ever experienced. That includes movie & TV. I love the multiverse aspect. Please continue this story. We need more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please continue this story line.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Bummer this is 3 years old. Need more.

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