All Comments on 'Mum Jumps Me after Tell of Incest'

WTF,!!!!!

I agree with the other comment

This is way to confusing and makes little sense. Try a rewrite with someone to proof read it.

Dude Learn how to write a story with structure the first half was good then you rushed it and fucked the the whole thing up

Bad bad writing. Good premise and then u rushed it to a point of being not good at all.

It's all over the place and no logic behind it. Needs a lot of proofreading. Suggest remove then work on it and resubmit but as is it sucks.

This was just bad. Sorry

...I'm a right language Nazi, but the comments below are clearly from Americans, unable to comprehend something written in UK vernacular.

A decent yarn, if a little short.

Probably a 3.75, but I'll give you a 5 to help offset the Americans :)

For the read.