All Comments on 'Mum, Sis and Bro. Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great chapter!!!!!

Hope to see many more!!!!!

kingswedekingswedeabout 4 years ago
Great story

You have a great story line going and hope it goes on for many more chapters.

Mother and daughter love is a great part of the story.

I do have one question, why did you mention the pawn shops owners daughter following him but never kept that line active?

Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really enjoying your story

Hope this continues, and Grandpa and Aunt join in

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81about 4 years ago
very nice

My wife and i have enjoyed this series we hope that you keep it up for a while more. great stuff

tower1604tower1604about 4 years agoAuthor
Part 6 written,

Part 6 now written, moderator should publish soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
My 2 cents

Love the series. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I am really enjoying this story . Thanks for posting it

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely awesome the whole story. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s UK.

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