All Comments on 'Mum, Sis and Bro. Pt. 14'

Hope to see more.

Please keep going.

...probably one of your best mate! Kept me gripped, keep it going. Duncan.

No not many people liked this you really don't grasp the concept of staying on the focus point this was supposed to be about the love a brother has for his sister and mom yet you all but took him out of the picture and then had her get pregnant with some other man knowing full well the brother will never be able to be a father to the child and you had him get other women pregnant you have so royal fucked up this story that even if you wrote another 100 chapters to this series you couldn't fix it you fucked it up the moment you brought another man into it then you completely took it away from incest all together which changed the focus point of the story you have no business writing a incest story cause you have no damn clue how to keep it in the incest catagory people click on it to read cause it said incest you shouldn't fucking bring in other men and women all that does is cause friction and jealously