All Comments on 'Mum, Sis and Bro. Pt. 15'

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Southpaw1430Southpaw1430over 3 years ago
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Looking forward to the next Chapter. An excellent story. Thanks.

JLR6486JLR6486over 3 years ago

You’re a great writer never let anyone make you think otherwise

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 3 years ago

Still waiting for part 16. Please do write more

UncletoddUncletoddover 2 years ago

Amazing couldn't stop reading so ready for the next chapters.

MfkndragonMfkndragon9 months ago

I'm not sure I wanna read another chapter due to the fact that you claimed so many different times that they were in love with each other but yet you kept bringing in other guys and women and they just fucked them without a seconds thought and it started with beth how she claimed she was in love with her brother and then the first chance she got she gave some other man a blow job then she claimed her body was only for her brother then at first chance she fucked another guy in front of him and then allowed the other guy to cum inside her and she kept messing with that other guy while her mom fucked him that's not love all she did was culkold him and proved she flatly out lied to him and then you brought other girl's in had him get them pregnant and so forth you seem to have forgotten what the series was supposed to be about which is incest and you seem to have forgotten what the title of the story was named which is called mom, sister and bro not mom,sister,bro and others there is a difference when have it titled mom, sister and bro that means it should have stayed between them and them alone you have left the guys and girls out of it if you wanted to bring them in you have changed the name to mom, sister, brother and others instead you ruined a good story at the same time as lying to your readers with a mistitled story so yeah reading as I write no I don't wanna read another chapter cause you have already ruined the story so much that there is no way it can be fix so due us a favor and don't write another chapter to this and learn when you write a incest story to keep it a incest story only way the others could have worked in this story was if they were involved before the incest started and once it started they should be left out of the rest of the story or series however you started with incest and then brought in the others and lies and everything else

dlearyousdlearyous8 months ago

WOW! Just finished a marathon reading of this story. Now that there's no more to read, I can comment. Throughly enjoyed the story.

Carp2021Carp20218 months ago

Where is chapter 16

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