All Comments on 'Mum's Birthday Present'

well maid 5 stars

Damned, I loved this story. I want to do my mother so bad and the water sports make it even more sexy. thank you.

....with all of the piss talk.

Excellent tale, beautifully written too. It was believable, they didn't just jump straight into bed and fuck as soon as they met up, there was a good steady build up to that point.

I'm not into watersports, so that side of the story did little for me, but otherwise it was an excellent tale.

A great story, well laid out. Thanks. Now I wished I had fucked my mother who I know was a slut and would have been into golden showers or water play..

Wonderful.

Is there a bit of truth here ? Very much enjoyed and wonder.....

Great story, just wish I could of shared it with someone in my family.

And so very kinky too! Love it! Thank you!

Listen, pal, if you're wondering what to get your mother for her birthday, forget about chocolates or roses. You've already got the perfect present for mom. It's right there jumping around in your pants. Your fat hard cock, the hardest she's ever experienced, up your mother's warm wet cunt will be a delightful surprise. Mothers never cum over candy or flowers, but they cum like crazy when their sons blow their young balls and shoot a huge twatful of semen up the same glorious twat they came out of.

All i do reading the story is imagine my mom thats awesome story man

Beautiful story. Flowed well from one scene to the next. I've been into watersports even preteen with female cousins. Loved it.

Wonderfully written story, and absolutely arousing

I really liked this story, although it is probably a fantasy it is so well written that it gives the impression of being true. I wonder if you (the author) indulge in wetting and water-sports yourself and if the three layers of panties under pants, my personal choice too, for wetting was chosen from experience.

Well done!

My two favourite fetishes. Water sports and stockings. Delicious.