All Comments on 'Mum's Friend Made Me Into a Man'

by Hailstorm28

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
spelling errors

The story is full of spelling errors, appears like some young kid wrote it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
WOW

a baby goat is now submitting stories here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OKAY ANONYMOUS

If you didn't like it why did you read it?? you are a jerk!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved It

Loved your story. Don't take any notice of the idiots. Fuck you had me cumming.

More Please!!!

Gloria

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Puerile

It should have been posted on subliterotica.com.

kplusmckplusmcabout 12 years ago
great story

hope you continue this story has many options for further chapters. she could continue his education they could be discovered and mother could become involved any number of other options. ignore those idiots who are more concerned about grammatical errors and spelling editing helps but if you can't use your name your just a coward go teach grammar and spelling somewhere.

Paxo1944Paxo1944about 12 years ago
Brilliant

What a great story with so much promise for future episodes.

It's a pity that some morons who choose to criticise do so without showing their names, why not have the courage of your convictions?

I think this story is great please write more.

greenhawk46greenhawk46almost 11 years ago
the way it should be

every guy's first should be like this-well-written, thanks

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
thanks for the story

a proof reader would help make it even better

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wow...

THEY'RE = contraction = THEY ARE

THEIR = belongs to = THEIR car

THERE = direction = over THERE

YOU'RE = contraction = YOU ARE

YOUR = belongs to = YOUR car

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
great story

good story nice & quick

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
ok...

she screamed the house down with people in the next room?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Good thing that you didn't scream out loud or else you guys would have been caught red handed

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
OK...

...first you tell us definitely you've never had sex then you describe in detail how your mum's friend fucked you?

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Cute and quick. Thanks for sharing.

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