by Hailstorm28
The story is full of spelling errors, appears like some young kid wrote it.
If you didn't like it why did you read it?? you are a jerk!!!
Loved your story. Don't take any notice of the idiots. Fuck you had me cumming.
More Please!!!
Gloria
hope you continue this story has many options for further chapters. she could continue his education they could be discovered and mother could become involved any number of other options. ignore those idiots who are more concerned about grammatical errors and spelling editing helps but if you can't use your name your just a coward go teach grammar and spelling somewhere.
What a great story with so much promise for future episodes.
It's a pity that some morons who choose to criticise do so without showing their names, why not have the courage of your convictions?
I think this story is great please write more.
every guy's first should be like this-well-written, thanks
THEY'RE = contraction = THEY ARE
THEIR = belongs to = THEIR car
THERE = direction = over THERE
YOU'RE = contraction = YOU ARE
YOUR = belongs to = YOUR car
Good thing that you didn't scream out loud or else you guys would have been caught red handed
...first you tell us definitely you've never had sex then you describe in detail how your mum's friend fucked you?